First thoughts on first pass design
Here are some thoughts, just to get the conversation started.
- It's awesome that you are taking the initiative to do this.
- Your idea for the conversion illustration in the lower half of the page is excellent. (I won't comment on fine details yet).
- The font for "The playlist format meant to be shared" feels wrong.
- "The playlist format meant to be shared" is a good text tweak.
- The "We began writing" paragraph needs a fresh start.